This may be the first time I've commented on your story, so first let me say I'm loving it. You're doing wonderful things with characterization, and it takes a lot of skill to do that with such short chapters. So yay, you!

I confess I'm glad to see you warming up to Emily in this chapter. I don't know if this is your ultimate goal. I happen to like her character far more than Elle's and I can't wait to see how things are going to turn out in Season 3.

So write on!