I liked the writing style; it took me 2 readings (it's late and I'm tired!), but once I figured out who was speaking I decided I liked not having details told to me but "hearing" them spoken. I don't know if I'd like many stories in this style, but it was a nice change. It seems to fit an emotionally charged story, like this one. Too many explained details would distract from the the conversation (and the angst!).

And I liked the theme also. The interaction between Haley and Gideon was natural and believable.